I just started a website and I'm looking for some honest feedback.?
Question:Please, no slamming! Just check out www.thesummertimedreams.com and let me know what needs to be added, deleted or changed. Please!!
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The main page has HUGE fonts... and the line breaks should be removed in the frame, as it is wrapping on me (17" screen) after just one or two words in some of the lines. The "not online" icon and your email contact address are overlapping with the end of your paragraph (from "If you have any..." onwards is coverd over with next section).
I have sent you a screen capture by email.
Pretty good site. Some layout problems when it comes up but nothing to great. One thing about writing style: Read what you wrote out loud to yourself. If it doesn't sound right then revise until it does. Sometimes how things sound in your head isn't how it really reads. Other than that just touch it up and I will look again in a few weeks and see where you are with it.
Looks good in Firefox.
I think it has potential. I found the google ads annoying. Probably because they are white and don't fit in with the color scheme. I also found the stick figure annoying as it crossed the page as I was trying to read. It was cute as far as animation goes. Perhaps you could put it over a blank space so it doesn't interfer with the reading. How often do you plan to update?
Just saw your last update. Don't forget to add the title to your page <title>Your Title Here</title> to your html code. I noticed when I added you to my favorite place . It just says Page Title .
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